Regret!
All the smiles you brought on my lips,
All the kisses you planted,
All the glances at which my heart flips,
All the hugs you granted,
I want to forget, being in love, I regret!
All your tantrums I withstood,
All the yelling I heard,
All your stress which I understood,
All the times with tears my eyes got blurred,
I want to forget, being unconditional, I regret!
All the times we fought,
All the laughs that would later start,
All the loneliness you slowly bought,
All the dreams of us that stayed broken in my heart,
I want to forget, losing myself, I regret!
All that I did for our happiness,
All that I did for our togetherness,
All the questions that went unanswered,
All the pleas that went unheard,
I want to forget, when I am gone, you will regret!
if its regrettable then it's never love :( .. nicely written especially the rhyming scheme:)
ReplyDeleteNever thought of it that way, thanks for reading, Ankur. :)
DeleteI can totally relate to this one. Living across town from my husband works well. - Fawn
ReplyDeleteAwww..Distance helps! I agree! :)
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It isn't easy to forget, fortunately or unfortunately :-) Beautiful poem :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Amrit! :)
DeleteI echo what the first comment says. You can never regret love! It either was love or a lesson. Nothing else in between. Maybe you should think about what it exactly was.
ReplyDeleteI loved the feelings you put into this. Reminds me of me, so years ago! :)
Thanks Soumya. I like your perspective, time to change mine. :)
Deleteaaawww.....that's a beautifully written sad poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Natasha! :)
DeleteOne must not regret relationships. If nothing else, they shape us for the better :)
ReplyDeleteI agree, Chintan! :) It takes a while to understand that, though. :P
DeleteI can relate quite well to this poem. But then, when you look back, you realize there's no point in regretting; cos at the end of the day, you learn something even from a really bad relationship.
ReplyDeleteWonderfully written!
I know, these things only make us stronger and wiser. :)
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Hi... visiting your blog for the first time! I liked the poem. . I personally am incapable of rhyming. But I agree with the comment above here. .. It was either love or a lesson. Why regret love and all the sweet memories that only love could have given you? Even if it broke your heart, did it teach you to not fall in love again? :-)
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I totally understand what you are saying. I am going to change my perspective, now. :)
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It's a beautiful rhyme scheme...the thought reminded me of the Hindi poem in the movie Jab Tak Hai Jaan, where there was love, anger, anguish, betrayal etc. Its very well penned.
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