Water
It was on a beach shore on a rainy day.
That he had said it was over, and had walked away.
She was numb,
The sound of the waves, echoing the chaos of her mind.
The incessant rain drenching her like the pain was drenching her from inside.
The waves were pulling her into the sea just like her memories were pulling her into their hold.
The painful tears flowing down her eyes just like the whirlwind of emotions flowing in and out of her heart.
Were making her pain intolerable,
Her despair seem unfathomable,
Were making her pain intolerable,
Her despair seem unfathomable,
She then, succumbed to the forms of water and let them drain away all her pain.
She walked ahead never to look back, only after gaining back her heart's reign!
how beautifully and poignantly this was rhymed .. :) beautiful !
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Lovely words... Pain nicely brought out, Pooja...
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ReplyDeleteI loved the rhyming in this prose ... this was so so beautiful ... loved it :-)
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