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Paa!



I looked up enquiringly as he walked in, looking like me.

"He is a nice guy, he will keep you happier than I did," said Pa, in my voice.

He had used the accidental soul exchange to test the guy I love and his love for me.

"I love you Pa!", I exclaimed in his gruff voice," and nobody can keep me happier than you do, NOBODY!"

" I heartily wish he does," said Pa, with a smile camouflaging the happy tears in his eyes!

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This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.

 Also, linking it to five sentence fiction for  'Wishes' at Lillie McFerrin Writes.
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  1. Ankur AnandJune 15, 2014 at 3:59 AM

    "with a smile camouflaging the happy tears" beautiful line :)

    And congratulation for accidental soul exchange programme :D

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  2. NishaJune 15, 2014 at 4:41 AM

    Sweet! Dad's are always our first love!

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  3. Swathi ShenoyJune 15, 2014 at 7:18 AM

    Won't we all wait for such an approval ;) Nice combnation of prompts pooja :)

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  4. Rupasi June 15, 2014 at 8:56 AM

    Awwww.... :)
    Even I want a guy for myself who is exactly like my dad... and that is asking a lot from a guy!!! :P

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    1. The Side I HideJune 23, 2014 at 6:59 AM

      Isn't it? I am hoping I find someone as good as well! :)

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  5. Sushree DashJune 16, 2014 at 9:32 AM

    Wow...it's so good :) I wish this happens with everybody ;)

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  6. UnknownJune 16, 2014 at 1:42 PM

    Awesome! Excellent take on the prompt :)

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  7. Red HandedJune 16, 2014 at 9:55 PM

    TRUE...No man can keep or atleast try to keep you as happy as your dad!!

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  8. Soumyaa VermaJune 19, 2014 at 5:06 AM

    Aww! That was such a sweet story :)

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  9. Amrit SinhaJune 19, 2014 at 8:03 PM

    This is beautiful ... really beautiful :-)

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  10. Vishal BheerooJune 22, 2014 at 1:32 AM

    This is a powerful one, Pooja and sweetly told between the love between father and daughter. A beautiful treatment:)
    http://voicewithin-pooja-laxmeshwar.blogspot.in/2014/06/paa.html

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  11. HaddockJune 24, 2014 at 8:34 PM

    I suppose Dads understand their daughter better than mom.

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  12. Anita SabatJuly 5, 2014 at 9:25 PM

    True Pooja :) I share your sentiments :)

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  13. Jyotsna BhatiaJuly 7, 2014 at 10:30 AM

    Thats a sweet one. And yes, nobody can keep a girl happy than our dads :')

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  14. CookieCrumbsInc.July 26, 2014 at 8:22 AM

    D'awww :)

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  15. Ashwin KumarOctober 5, 2014 at 5:23 AM

    Excellent!

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