Paa!



I looked up enquiringly as he walked in, looking like me.

"He is a nice guy, he will keep you happier than I did," said Pa, in my voice.

He had used the accidental soul exchange to test the guy I love and his love for me.

"I love you Pa!", 
I exclaimed in his gruff voice," and nobody can keep me happier than you do, NOBODY!"

" I heartily wish he does," said Pa, with a smile camouflaging the happy tears in his eyes!


Source: Google





This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.

Also, linking it to five sentence fiction for  'Wishes' at Lillie McFerrin Writes.

Comments

  1. "with a smile camouflaging the happy tears" beautiful line :)

    And congratulation for accidental soul exchange programme :D

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  2. Sweet! Dad's are always our first love!

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  3. Won't we all wait for such an approval ;) Nice combnation of prompts pooja :)

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  4. Awwww.... :)
    Even I want a guy for myself who is exactly like my dad... and that is asking a lot from a guy!!! :P

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    1. Isn't it? I am hoping I find someone as good as well! :)

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  5. Wow...it's so good :) I wish this happens with everybody ;)

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  6. Awesome! Excellent take on the prompt :)

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  7. TRUE...No man can keep or atleast try to keep you as happy as your dad!!

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  8. Aww! That was such a sweet story :)

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  9. This is beautiful ... really beautiful :-)

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  10. This is a powerful one, Pooja and sweetly told between the love between father and daughter. A beautiful treatment:)
    http://voicewithin-pooja-laxmeshwar.blogspot.in/2014/06/paa.html

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  11. I suppose Dads understand their daughter better than mom.

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  12. True Pooja :) I share your sentiments :)

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  13. Thats a sweet one. And yes, nobody can keep a girl happy than our dads :')

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